Annotation Mistborn 2 Chapter Seventeen Chapter Seventeen So, now the Watcher is named. I didn’t originally intend him to remain mysterious for so long. In fact, in the original draft, I had a viewpoint from him fairly early on. That’s been moved back in this version, to make things flow more quickly at the beginning,…

Annotation Mistborn 2 Chapter Sixteen Chapter Sixteen Vin in her room This first scene is a classical Brandon scene–a character studying, thinking, and exploring who they are in their own head. Some people find my narrative style–with the thoughts, the conclusions, and the debates in the head–to be a little slow. I can understand that,…