Annotation Elantris Chapter 43

Annotation Elantris Chapter 43 Chapter Forty-three So, in the original version of the book, Raoden and Galladon saw Eton’s army outside the city when they went up to the top of the wall. This shocked and concerned them, which is why they went searching for Sarene to get news about the outside world. More on…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 42

Annotation Elantris Chapter 42 Chapter Forty-two Hum. I forgot how short many of these chapters got. Usually, I don’t let my chapters get this short in a book. I like longer chapters, and tend to be pretty stable in my chapter lengths. ELANTRIS, however, is an aberration. It has a good twenty chapters more than…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 41

Annotation Elantris Chapter 41 Chapter Forty-One My biggest challenge in this chapter was to make it believable to a reader that the characters would accept Sarene as an Elantrian. The plotting of this section of the book relies on Sarene thinking that she’s actually been transformed–otherwise, she would try to escape, and I wouldn’t be…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 39

Annotation Elantris Chapter 39 Chapter Thirty-Nine I did this triad a little differently. You might notice that the Hrathen chapter starts off right where the Sarene chapter ends. Again, I eventually decided to be more loose with the triad system than I’d originally intended. It would have been to limiting to force all three chapters…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 38

Annotation Elantris Chapter 38 Chapter Thirty-eight: Ah, we needed some more Lukel. He hasn’t been around enough lately. I’m glad I had the presence of mind to throw in a character to balance out Shuden and Eondel’s solemnity. Lukel doesn’t really have much part in the plot, but he’s always there to throw in a…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 37

Annotation Elantris Chapter 37 Chapter Thirty-Seven We’ve entered the section of the plot where Raoden has a few short chapters (this one and the one before.) As I mentioned, his major plot cycle–the three gangs–for the first part of the book is over. Right now, the most important things are happening on the outside of…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 36

Annotation Elantris Chapter 36 Chapter Thirty-Six Dakhor. One of the better words I came up for this book, I think. Be patient with me–I’m going somewhere with this whole Dakhor monastery thing. We’ll get there eventually. For now, enjoy Hrathen’s visions. Or, rather, be disturbed by them. (Dakhor, if you haven’t noticed, isn’t a very…

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Annotation Elantris Chapter 34

Annotation Elantris Chapter 34 Chapter Thirty-four I know it seems like I’m setting Shaor up for a return, but I really don’t intend to bring her back. At least, I didn’t when I wrote this chapter. The truth is, I just didn’t want to write a scene of the madmen returning with the torn up…

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