Annotation- Defending Elysium

Annotation- Defending Elysium It’s hard to dig back through my memory to the days when I wrote the rough draft of this story. What was going through my head? The story was written on a beach near Monterey California, and remains the only published piece of mine I did entirely in longhand before transcribing to…

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Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Seven

Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Seven The Death of Bilg You may not recognize a cameo appearance by Bilg in this chapter. He was the soldier who punched Demoux. Who is Bilg? Well, if you go read book one, you’ll find a scene where Kelsier visits the caves where his army is training. He picks a…

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Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Five

Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Five “Reen” is Ruin Did you really think I’d bring Reen back? Well, maybe you did. It’s all right if you did; we in the fiction world have kind of acclimatized people to strange resurrections of long-dead characters. I’d guess it’s due to one of two things. Either 1) The author…

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Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Four

Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Four Subtlety with the Power The Lord Ruler created koloss, kandra, and Inquisitors during his time holding the power. This took some practice and experimentation, however. As has been explained, holding the power granted some intuitive understanding of how to use it. For instance, he knew how to make Hemalurgic creatures—but…

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Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Three

Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Three The Ball at the Canton of Resource I didn’t want this chapter to be a repeat of the previous ball scene, so I kept the nostalgia to a minimum and focused on the plan. I hope I’ve established why Vin and Elend are willing to take this risk—a mixture of…

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Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Two

Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-Two Marsh Visits Penrod in Luthadel This chapter didn’t exist in the initial draft of the book; I added it in revisions. I originally liked the idea of the characters happening upon Luthadel later in the book and having to piece together what happened to Penrod from the aftermath of his…

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Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-One

Annotation Mistborn 3 Chapter Forty-One Sazed and Breeze Discuss the New Survivor I’m not sure whether this is an appropriate use of the term ostention or not. I guess Dr. Thursby, my folklore professor at college, will have to read the book and let me know. Seemed like it worked for me. For a lot…

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